Wednesday, February 15, 2012

As if shot by cupids bow, two ardent lovers emerge from two villain families, eager and passionate for each other’s love, willing to surmount all obstacles and deterrent… but will the Moirai look to this as a happy ending, or turn it into a tragedy…

Oh Juliet, this spring, how big my love is
When I first saw you, how big my love was
Like a mighty angel flexing its wings and filling the globe
As if mine eyes had been revealed to Gaia’s azure soul from the underworld
and my tongue, never having tasted honey,
craves for the elysian delight.
Young Abraham Cupid hath loost pink arrows at our swollen hearts
with agile and concise aim
Cloud-9 loomed above us and took us for a wild love ride,
Flew us to heaven where the stars paled against thine beauty,
To twinkle in their spheres until we returned.

Thou art in possession of divine beauty,
So divine, Venus looks upon thee with envious eyes
Like a white diamond amongst a mountain of coal
Athena’s wisdom palls when thou art speakest eloquent words
Thine eyes so profound, are binoculars staring into space,
It pulls me into a deep trance,
letting an hour pass within seconds,

Yet for my heart to leave thee,
Can love so bright ever be so cruel,
If only time would wait for us to have one last kiss,
My heart aches, and it would be better off dead,so I leave it with thee.
Albeit I shall look to the east and cherish in thy rays of warmth,
saturnine fog distorts my hopes,
A vague premonition imbues me with worries
and thou look’st pale tonight
Methinks I see us together in the bottom of a tomb;
Regardless, bright wings will take us to heaven.

Adieu, adieu, take good care of my heart.



(restriction...i didnt use "You" or "I")


1 comment:

  1. Wow! You are such a well spoken poet. I am very impressed with your writing. My only other comment would be that you may have slipped with a few "I's", but I can imagine that dealing with two separate restrictions would have been quite a challenge. My overall comment- Great job.

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